Saturday, November 12, 2005

NO title



I could not decide what topic to give it as otherwise the essence of this poem will be lost..

Stepping into this world with two impressions!
Helped into this world by you don't know who!
O man of little faith have you're cup of tea!
And believe in "me" at least to sustain!!!
The less of "me" the more succinct you are
"Me" the cause of you're worry
The more of "Me" the less abrupt you are
Not to wince you any further
"Me" the cause of worldly happiness too!!!

At you're ingress into the gate of mortality
"I" was not there but "She" was
When you r are alone "I" will be there if you think I should
And to tell u "She" will vanish!!!!!!!!!!!

You man of little faith, at the end of this poem I know you still dont have the "Me" in you and the "She" is there in you, because the"Me" is hope and the "She " is confusion
Now you r spell bound!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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goblin said...

awesome blog.....!!!!
i just have 2 words for this fantabulous blog.. "flawlessly astounding"... keep up the good work...
all i can say is that at the end of the poem i no longer have the "me" in me.. thats for sure... but i sure do have the "me" in you to come up with
exceptionally superb blogs pretty soon.. < although u dnt seem to have the "me" in you now... >

dnt tell me this is a "me" against "me"...!!!

"me" is hope.. ;)

the teller said...

fafs.. dint know u had such a fantastic brain tat cud create such an awesome poem.. hats off.. totally.. one needs to reread it to understand.. srsly too good... come up wid more such weird stuff.. damn interesting read!!

mages said...

fafs jus amazing for words.OVER RANGE-MOOMMMYYY.Couldnt understand till i read te last few phrases.Jus speaks of ur poetictalent.Anyways keep up the good job and come up wid more messy-sexy ones Ms.Peter