Monday, July 02, 2007

The umbrella woman

Monday back from work is life’s best gift. The very thought of a Monday sends a smirk on the faces of the otherwise smiling & bubbling. Samyuktha was getting back from one such day. The sun was beaming high at 5:30 pm in the evening. She had packed herself immediately after her head left for a meeting. Without giving anyone a clue, she left her bag on her table and rushed out of work with just her house key and wallet. Sometimes Samyuktha couldn’t sit at office and work. She would become restless and her legs would start shaking as if to the beats of the construction work that was going on outside. This was one such a day. The piles of documents were left unbothered.
Sam ( as she was fondly called by her friends) was feeling like a liberated bird. She took an auto and sat there dreaming about the book that she could finish today, now that she had all the time. What had seemed a bright evening suddenly darkened. She peeped out of the auto to see the clouds join hands to shower her with all their might. Rain drops tickled down her face, sliding as a roller coaster. She let out her hands out of the auto, to feel the rain on her skin. A man in red –bright shirt, on a Kinetic shouted at her and told her to stop acting like an actress and insisted on her putting her hands inside. Sam couldn’t care less. Suddenly the auto broke down. There came the bombshell just right at the time when she was rejoicing this lovely day. Sam got out of the auto, stuffed the money in the auto driver’s hand and ran to the nearby tree. She cursed herself for having ventured out of office on this day. All that seem lovely suddenly turned fateful. She liked the rain, but didn’t like getting jet-wet in it. Sam noticed a shadow lurking towards her. Her musings were interrupted by a soft gentle voice. “Oh you are going to catch a cold- come inside this umbrella. It will help you”. Sam was startled. She replied- “ Oh! No thanks . It’s not a problem”. The lady said “common , not a problem. This umbrella can take you and me”. Sam felt a sudden loveliness in the voice. Sam inched closer inside the umbrella. Inside, she was furiously thanking the lady for the offer. Not knowing what to say , she asked “ Do autos come this side ?”. The lady replied “ Yes . Ofcourse. Guess you can flag one of those running on the road”. Sam realized how silly her question was. She didn’t know what to speak and hence came rolling-that question. She felt a sudden happiness and realized that such a small act of sharing one’s umbrella really did give pleasure. She then asked herself if she would have done the same like the lady. Sam knew she wouldn’t have done it by herself. She was the kind of person who wouldn’t volunteer. She felt a thunderous joy, the yellow fat little vehicle whooshed past her. She stopped it. Thanked the lady-with the soft, gentle voice, and offered to drop her at her place. Sam hopped home merrily and dashed at the book.

11 comments:

Priyanka said...

when i read the word bombshell.. i really thot there was a bombshell in your story which burst! haha... we expect the unexpected at times... exactly why this story is so warm... lowely! =)

Preetha said...

warm story.. but in reality.. it's these umbrella ladies who get hurt the most.. then the umbrella ladies become like Sam...

Mithr said...

@ preetha

Get hurt in reality? What ya mean by that. didn't quite get it

Quarter Past Seven said...

Sometimes when strangers do small things for us, it makes us happy beyond belief. What gets me thinking is, why don't we feel the same happiness when the same gesture is made by our friends. If it had been one of Sam's friends offering the umbrella, the story would have ended differently. Don't you think?

Ramya Shankar said...

Such small gestures in life, leave you beaming !
Nice one there !
Thanks for dropping by my space, do frequent.

N . P . M said...

Nice post!! Hmmm could you change the backgroun or font colour a bit.. The eyes hurt after sometime..Just a suggestion

Unknown said...

noticed a loot of changes in your blog :) nice job. well this post is so deja-vu a feeling that i have had, many times. even the canteen lady smiling at me or sum1 offering me a seat in the mrt when i look tired, makes my day big time. (nice intro btw, i know who leaves their bag in office and leaves!!)

Confused Soul said...

It really gives you a good feeling when people you don't even know help you out. Yesterday my sandals snapped and I couldn't walk!! The cashier at Health and Glow offered me some tape to tape my sandals up.. but the most lovely part was that she smiled all through and after I was done, she asked if my sandal was secure enough and if I would manage. So sweet! Then half an hour later when we were elsewhere, the other sandal snapped..lol..went to a hotel reception and the receptionist couldn't find the tape.. then when we were leaving, she called us back and said she had found it.

I was pissed because my sandals had snapped, but these two little incidents cheered me up again :)

Archun said...

wow! that was srsly well written! Though I don't quite agree that monday evenings back from work are life's best gifts! I'm a more of a Friday eve person I s'pose! :-)
The umbrella woman, I guess is quite idealistic! If I were in Sam's place I would have clutched my purse hard and peered at her looking for some suspicious biscuits! Its so sad that life today has come to this...Ironically, the other day in Mustafa, I helped a patti get onto an escalator - she smiled and thanked me and I must say it was the best feeling in the world!

Mithr said...

@ Bart Simpson:

Yes true. Had it been one of sam's friend, it would have been different because in a relationship ,certain things come without saying. Its not that you are taken for granted. Helping a friend is something that you are bound to do. Helping a stranger is the difference between you and the others. so there is no question of comparison between a friend and a stranger.

Mithr said...

@ ramya

Very true:) Will keep checking your updates.

@ raghavendra

your suggestion taken Thanks !

@anuja

unrelated people sometimes make a difference- as you said, a smile is enough to make one's day. and about the bag, it struck me hard while writing this, so just thought will pass on the suggestion to the readers without revealing the person :P for all you know, she might be reading it now and laughing

@confused soul
hahaha

@archun
talk to me about paatis .. i love the old ;)